ScaryStory 1: THIS GUY!!!!

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You know this feeling...
When...
You're at school with your class,your friends and the teacher ask you to bring him something in this very dark place at the other side of the corridor.
THIS corridor.
You cross this corridor you hate to go at your lessons.
THIS corridor you take to go out of your school.
And you know what is in THIS corridor.
A terrifying shadow.
She look at you and you don't like this.

So you let go your pen and you start to walk to the door.
You push the door and you enter in this dark,cold and very long corridor...
You hear nothing.
It's quiet.
Too quiet.
But you just want to return in your class with your friends more fast as possible.
So you walk in this long corridor....you're cold,and it's very scary.
You hear whispers,the walls are very high and there is smalls windows.
You don't see perfectly in the dark but you can see something next a door.
It's moving and this thing is very dark and tall.
You keep walking when suddenly you hear something loud and you're afraid.
Now you are not walking anymore you heart accelerate and you run.
You grab the pair of scissors of your teacher and you run in the corridor to return quickly in the class.
Now you're next to the door of your class.
And...you hear a terrifying scream."NO NEXT TIME I'LL GET YOU!!!!!!"
You push the door.
It's fine now you see the soothing light of your class.
Your class is smiling and it's fine.
You bring the pair of scissors to your teacher and now it's okay.



When...You're best friend asks you...




BF : You saw him?
You:Who?
BF:This guy.*show a window*

This guy is tapping the window and whispering:Next time i'll get you...

You: Who is he?What does he want?
BF: Us.He wants to be noticed.He is a ghost.Adults don't see him.Only us(students)can see him.
You: It can't be!!!!!!
Bf: You don't believe me?Wait.Mister?
Teacher:Yes?
BF: Where is Brad?
Teacher:How many times I told you!!!!Brad is a dead student.AND HIS GHOST IS NOT HAUNTING THIS CORRIDOR!!!!!!!!
You: How do you know his name?
BF: His jacket had the name "Brad" on his back.
You: So,you see him too?
BF: Every student can see him but when you become adult or teacher you don't see him.
You: Why only students can see him?
BF: Because a teacher kill Brad.And he don't want to relive his death.
You: How did he die?
BF: He hated his class and one day he fought a classmate.A  teacher comes to separate the students.But Brad was very strong and he hurt the teacher.
So the teacher grab Brad and hit him at death.Anyone helped Brad because they were afraid of him and of the situation.The legends told they buried his body under the corridor between the old corridor and the new stairs.Just near to our classroom.And he continues to hope someone finally fall from the stairs to grab her/him.His parents are dead too.
Oh and one thing again....
You: Yes?
Teacher: Times up!!!!Gimme your work!!!!


BF: Brad loves a girl.And I think he loves you.
Teacher: BRAD IS DEAD NOW DON'T TALK ABOUT HIM!!!!!I HOPE WITH ALL MY SOUL HE IS NOT FOR RETURN!!!
BF: Bu..
Teacher:NO WAY TO TALK ABOUT IT!!!
You:Mister he is just behi..
Teacher:COME LITTLE PUNK IF YOU WANT I'M READY TO DO THIS AGAIN!!!TWENTY YEARS TO HOPE THIS!!YOUR RETURN!!!!!!
???:Yeah,finally killtcher!!!(Killer + teacher = stupid surname XD)Twenty years to wait this to shoot your face in a wall.


This guy is standing  just in front of your teacher.
Teacher: It's...not...only a...legend....
???:Not a legend you just have your feet on my body.I'm under this floor.Dead and bury,in pain and not in peace.
I scream for help but anyone comes...they run away....*reminds the terrifying scream and the loud noise*I was talking to you Mister,next time you'll across this corridor i'll get you.
Send a student for don't have to go at this place.....poor little thing.



This guy is very scary.
But he just want to rest in peace.
In a weird way i know.
But....This guy is just amazing.
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